Spoorthi NHS Global Warming Documentary

May 9, 2008

Thesis Statement for Documentary

Filed under: Causes, Effects on our Generation, Prevention, What is it? —— spoorthitata @ 10:14 pm

Thesis Statement: Due to the many changes in the environment and society caused global warming as well as the characteristics leading to global warming, people should be educated on what global warming is, how it is caused, how it effects us a society on Earth, and what we can do as human beings to help us in the future if global warming continues.

I believe this is a strong thesis because it addresses the audience on the topic as well as the different segments and topics covered in the documentary. I do believe this statement can be stronger because it is very repetitive in using the same words and the segments are straight out listed causing the thesis to seem weak. This is a good start though to what may become a stronger thesis if used.

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